Story Discussions!

So, here is where you can discuss the newest chapter, what you thought, what you liked, what you didn't like. This would actually be very helpful =D =D

So I just finished reading the prologue and chapter one... I have to say that I'm impressed how dirrect and to-the-point chapter one was in introducing the heroes, filling the hero steriotypes, and creating romantic tension. Also, I haven't laughed as hard as I did reading the King's letter in a long time.

oh my goodness thank you so much you rock!!!!!=D =D

I'm glad you enjoyed Thad's letter, he is quite fun to write =)

No problem.

The letter was a bit cheesy and predictable. You could have said "Send a group of people you trust that would be able to make the journey" or a variation or what I just said, that way it seems a little less like melted swiss.

It's supposed to be a bit cheesy. Thad is a fan of the cheese. =D Once he has his POV, you'll see... lol.
I thnk the fourth one is going to either be from his or his son's, I haven't decided yet ...

Yeah, the different POVs is different, yet kind of annoying when you're trying to keep track of who's who.

What about having each chapeter from a different POV and say who'
s POV it is at the begining of the chapter?

I thought that is what I was doing...
oh no, I probably messed up when I pasted it into the site X.x

It's okay. Mistakes happn.